Monday, July 16, 2012

Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

A stream of gloom in tow
The sun mellows in twilight
Colours of my life are as if fading
As if circle of life has turned fully
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Bireswar Halder
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Louis Cecile 16 July 2012

I love the flow and pacing for this poem. The subject is well concieved and the slow drift to the ends well with the last line.

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