Thursday, June 22, 2006

Death Comments

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the night descends unto me like the devil on a helpless soul
I feel it coming, slowly turning my blood cold
gripping it's claws tight round my body
never setting me free
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Meghan
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Darby Spielmaker 29 January 2007

good imagery, but i think your poems and whatever else you choose to do will be worth more than your dead body. like the humility though.

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David Gerardino 30 October 2006

I morph into the Earth, great line, makes the poem...

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