Monday, January 30, 2012

Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

As my last breath comes
i await the kiss
the last kiss of u and me
the kiss of death
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Arielle Friese
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Wahab Abdul 01 March 2012

a very beautiful poem, well composed, great piece of work, I like it……….keep sharing,

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very morbid. overall its a great poem tho arielle. Very nice job ^_^[3

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Deaire Taylor 09 February 2012

Wow.....all I can say is wow....this is GREAT...makes me wanna cry

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Unwritten Soul 07 February 2012

Arielle...it not worth to die or feel pain that someone who not appreciate you.. it's like when a flower dying because of a bee fly away...it never give impact to it, why dont keep bloom who knows there's butterfly and many bees to come and sing a long ..dont waste your life for useless reason, make your life richer and contentment with any reason! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Chidori Storm 31 January 2012

I feel that way right now about someone.....

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Misses Unknown 30 January 2012

i love this poem well done keep up the good work

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Lavion Bell 30 January 2012

you life look like a puzzle that need to be solved

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Arielle Friese

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