Death (678 Style) Comments

Guess it's true some things never change..loved the full trip in this one.

Biting irony in there. I found the ending particularly devastating.

touching effect and relates the realty of our borrowed life.. sad yet it leaves positive things... meaningful piece...in a good style form 10++++ lovelots, Maia

It was a pleasure to read this very well crafted 678 style poem, Sandra, which was wonderfully well written and expressed. Your poetic talent shines in this delightful poem! Carl.

three meaningful stanzas on the theme -death...each unique in its own...good work Sandra...10

Thought provoking. Indeed death is a business and many do profit from it. I like the way you wove the words into this creative poem. Thank you for sharing Sandra :)

The easiest way to have money (business) is all connected to death.......Lovely poem! ! !

well this is nice ma'am! ! i mean i do think of death most times.. i mean some believe in heaven.. yeah death do leave some good things too.. let alone taj mahal.. you just travel around the poem hunter and see how many poets have immortalize their loved ones... i mean As long as man can read and see and read these characters will live among us! ! ! this is a nice write indeed.... with love shan

I love it! Death is always around...! Nice doing!

great work indeed! ........10+

There is more than a touch of cynicism in this clever poem that lifts 'death' from the domain of the and romantic and puts it fair and square in the here and now. Death and taxes - inevitable we're told. Your poem shares your ideas with skill and a lyrical, gently mocking voice. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Your creative vision is 20/20. Your reference to the Taj Mahal is especially memorable. Kind regards, Sandra

Great work Sandra. You have certainly brought to light these masks of the dead. An intelligent and informative poem. 10 Karin Anderson

The many masks of death...superbly crafted in your 678....excellent show of your natural talent my lovely......keep them coming 10++++

Rated 10 from me................

an undercurrent of stocism...

lovely sandra this 678.....the various faces of death shown