Sunday, December 18, 2011

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met an angel;
Of heaven's archangel
At the river's brink.
She began to wink
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

You portraited the saddest things so beautifully.....very good.......10***** Rose

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David Gerardino 01 January 2012

i can see words, very good.......................

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izzy Barnwell 29 December 2011

Short but sweet.....I like this...Beautiful! ! ! ! It's hard to face death without fear.

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Eric Cockrell 29 December 2011

death, no more to be feared than a mother's touch! good poem!

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Binish Cd 29 December 2011

really a great poem to face death without fear.10+

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Jide Pounds Ibitoye 27 December 2011

Wow! , short, but contains a lot of meaning, good one bro....

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Mia Stubbs 25 December 2011

Beautiful!

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Young Church Poetry 23 December 2011

When people talk about death, its like there is no hope. But with your poem, there is hope. Beautiful work........

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Miroslava Odalovic 22 December 2011

The most difficult things are entirely simple :) Emo

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Jacqui Broad 22 December 2011

The title was misleading, because the poem is beautiful, yet also gentle. There are many angels surrounding us, we're just too blind to see. And maybe when we're in dreamland, it's better to believe, then... Great one, my friend.

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Sajna Kailas 20 December 2011

ohhhhhh beautiful narration. another super hit from you! ! keep it up! ! ! ! ! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Lama Mandow 19 December 2011

it's nt death at all.. is it the nervana?

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Virginia Pecho Gely 19 December 2011

Hi, Thanks for inviting me. I lost my husband last year and this poem lighten my heart. Thanks a lot for sharing. Please read my 2 poems and please give comments if your time will allow. Virginia

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Unwritten Soul 18 December 2011

Towards the end of last breathe, do we will confusing between two walls, a real world and heaven life? Like a phase of water meet air, Like ocean kiss the sky... I mean what we think about death is beyond our mind...but once we leave our body for soul up to sky we will see the real things...In earth we wear a body of human of many races, but will we wear a suit of body as a same race, or came from certain countries in heaven? ? As in heaven there's no differences..sure a beautiful mystery to think about.._Unwritten Soul

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Binish Cd 18 December 2011

hi friend, yet another nice poem. regards binish

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 December 2011

Wow! man, you always make me smile with your amazing poetic talent, , , superb poem my friend...

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