Saturday, October 18, 2014

Death Comments

Rating: 4.7

What we do, at last, shall make us get,
What men know are few opulent days and penurious weeks,
Keep knowing the betrayed eyes and fragile shrieks
Until the tears swell our fate.
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Yes, the end of evcerything is death. E.K.L.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 October 2014

A poignant piece expressed beautifully with wonderful lines.......keep writing....full marks

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Gajanan Mishra 18 October 2014

good one, I like it, thanks.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 18 October 2014

Death is pre determined and a truth. God paints space with dark matters. Darkness is compared with death. Likewise birth can be compared with light. Only it is important to understand about transient. Vey beautifully presented this poem about death. I am awarding you full mark 10 for this poem in rating. May God bless you. Keep on writing.

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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