Saturday, July 17, 2010

Death Comments

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i don't know where, and i don't know when
but i know that it, will one day happen

today tomorrow, or a hundred years
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Mohamad Rasoul Mohamadi
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Alex Fischer 04 August 2010

Like the way you present death like this. Also the thought put into it adds that extra 'umph' as I like to call it, to add that grabbing effect that catches the readers attention and gets them thinking.

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Chris Jibero 21 July 2010

Well presented poem.Live well now for it the duty of the living to bury the dead and say whatever they like of him.Nobody will stop that.You may as well read my 'Forever'.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 July 2010

your poem reflects your maturity. shan marks10

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Malaya Roses 18 July 2010

selfrealization is the most important in human journey. Kindness and compassion will guide us to reach what is good destination and avoid destructive decision. simple yet Good.

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