Friday, July 17, 2009

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

You think you moves away from her spell
Times will some time in cruel manner will tell
Shalt the era will grasp from the Sieve
Akin to Sand throughout wrist tie
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Dave Tanwar
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Mary Joy Lumanog 22 July 2009

I like this poem..the beauty and bitterness of death lies...well..yea I think so...love it!

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Ency Bearis 19 July 2009

a good concept deep and profound...nice

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Alex Andreev 18 July 2009

it's very deep poem. very good

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Dave Tanwar

Jodhpur, India
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