Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the monster wake up with rage
and we feed
our enemies to it.
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Gert Strydom
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Patrick McFarland 14 July 2009

'I do not die, but that monster kills something deep in me'. Absolutely brilliant Gert. That feeling deep within that something has died is so difficult to convey in words, but you managed very well. 10+

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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