Who am I?
Who am I living for and why?
I spend all my years in school trying to get an education
Then death takes it away.
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Poem started very well but some where in the middle it lost its rhythm. But any way good attempt Keep writing.
Soul never died & borned but it left the body many times..(in the life cycle- 84 Lackhs times) then you get this human life. So wish u all the best. Good poem & good thinking.