Sunday, May 17, 2009

Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

it comes at you like
a bullet
never knowing
when its coming
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Jessica Caswell
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A Lifetime Of Fame 09 July 2009

Wow that's a strong poem. Very amazing.

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Very beautiful and strong poem that reminds me of my grandpa that passed away 15 years ago when I was 6 years old and now I am 21. Thank you for posting this poem.

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

you have seen the other side of life, and although we find living twice as nice, we all have to depart this world to lead the way for the others to follow.(this is well written) i think this poem is meant for you to read. read my 'poems from heaven'

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you expressed it very well and deeply..that feeling of how we let themn just go..loved your expression here..well done it hurts loved ones but they have to let you go

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

hey you realy can write Jessica..great poem indeed..very frree flowing... keeep writing..10++

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Jazz Annis 17 May 2009

that is good...but i feel at though you can do better...

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