it comes at you like
a bullet
never knowing
when its coming
...
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Very beautiful and strong poem that reminds me of my grandpa that passed away 15 years ago when I was 6 years old and now I am 21. Thank you for posting this poem.
you have seen the other side of life, and although we find living twice as nice, we all have to depart this world to lead the way for the others to follow.(this is well written) i think this poem is meant for you to read. read my 'poems from heaven'
you expressed it very well and deeply..that feeling of how we let themn just go..loved your expression here..well done it hurts loved ones but they have to let you go
hey you realy can write Jessica..great poem indeed..very frree flowing... keeep writing..10++
Wow that's a strong poem. Very amazing.