Death Comments

Excellent poem expressing the philosophy of death very effectively. The poem is rich both in imagery and depth. Elegant write

Your death philosophy is readable And if somebody could erase the name Give a substitute, As we're fed up of that unvarnished name?

i think u mean dying alive...right? ? ? anyways very nice one...well done :)

'Our hearts must be full with faith So the surrender will be erased without leaving a trace.' That's good write. Very meaningful and expressive poem Enjoyed reading it 10+

this is actually so meaningfull....and expressive...nice rhyming...well done :)

there is no law but a natural law (Destiny) which imposes an ABSOLUTE TRUTH -The Death Our Common Destination- it is a sad effect but a strong FAITH resistes any Disaster/ 1010101010 Thanks For Sharing/

Very Well Done Merna...

this is a wonderful describing about the death great poem from a talented poet [ sabaa senaha] 10+++++

i love this poem, it's words came straight from your heart u said what's inside our heart&mind.

i love this poem, it's words came straight from your heart u said what's inside our heart&mind.

Very nice poem friend when we learn how to smile on worries........ there life wins 10

i dont like talking about death because it is the most shocking fact.but well done merna keep it up omar ibrahim(cairo-EGYPT)

You did well in dealing with a difficult subject. Keep writing.