DEATH.
DEATH IS WHEN YOU LEAVE THIS WORLD,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU HAVE REACHED YOUR FINAL DESTINATION,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU SAY GOOD BYE TO YOUR LOVE ONES
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There are some very good lines in here. Some are not so good. I'm not sure that you need the last two lines. GW62
Some say death is the beginning of another life. You have written some thought provoking words about death. Greenwolfe is right last two lines are unnecessary, nice write otherwise. Best Wishes Naseer