Death Comments

It's sad when a loved one dies. I suppose it's even harder to watch them die though. Awesome poem. I like it alot.

everyone does get depressed, this is another powerful write, but just because you lose someone physically, doesn't mean they aren't there.. i dont kno who you loss, but everyone everyday deals with loss, this poem shows great description of how you attempt to cope with yours.. it scares me though to be honest

the poem isn't bad, but you really must spell check before you submit

reallly great write, but sad.

sometimes I feel as if I wanna die... but then again I am so busy hiding behind my mask that I dont notice any more. it is good to leave your reader with a question. good job. Crystal

so sad so painful nice piece