I'm the truth living inside you
So don't hide, so don't cry.
I lay inside you since then.
Can you feel me in your arms?
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hai min, a beautiful face of death... the sublime reality... thanks
wow, this makes death seem sooo inviting...i love it! ! good poem! -Kelso
Woowowoowowoowowww...! ! ! Cooooooolll... I know this poem meaning... hahaha, , , i can guess it... This is very a great poem Min Sia, you're wrong if you said that you haven't a talent, This is the one! You write! You're the great poem! You're the inspiration! hahaha, , , love it! so much!
Min, you have captured death in the most friendlier way i have never thought. It surely makes any finite soul courageous to face it. I don't think i still have a reason to fear it. Thanks for great work here. Keep it up.
Very nicely written. I agree with you in many respects, but I don't necessarily things that death's invitation is so urgent. I hope you will read my poem, 'Death' and compare.
Death need not be feared...it certainly is not when brought forth from the tip of Min Sia’s pen. Death I do not fear if I am lead through engulf in the darkness. A marvelous, marvelous poem!
mam' are u really twenty? ......such a beautiful and thought provoking poem.......keep it up
Why I havent seen your poems so far? ? ! ! ! I wonder. This is pure classic....great poetry......................10
a great write..with good deliverance of the message..a nice piece.. A10 Ency Bearis
known reality is touced in depth.. great verses vs verses...