Monday, September 8, 2008

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moment I Die,
Our World will end.
There will
For me
...
Read full text

Paul Butters
COMMENTS
Marieta Maglas 03 August 2009

i like your surreal symbolistical poem.Its message is duly acknowledged.........10

0 0 Reply

Ah, a subject which surely every person contemplates, not without a tinge of fear. You phrase it elegantly and thoughtfully, provoking the same thoughts in your reader. (Me... I hope there is no afterlife, as I know I'd be going down.) . t x

0 0 Reply
<font color =fusha>Amy 19 September 2008

how wonderfully inspiring, keep going!

0 0 Reply
Paul Butters

Paul Butters

Leeds, West Yorkshire.
Close
Error Success