Saturday, August 16, 2008

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will your promise
to meet me some day be fulfilled?
before my eyelids droop in eternal sleep and infinite peace!
but better hurry up,
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Bharat Trivedi
COMMENTS
C. P. Sharma 25 May 2009

Awesome imagery, very well penned. I also posted a poem with the same title, please read it at your convinience. CP

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Egi David Perdana 27 August 2008

surely all people will die

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Anjali Sinha 19 August 2008

Nice poem but with shades of melancholia. whatever +10 bharaat.thanks for sharing regards anjali

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