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floating in the cool water
oblivious to the dangers of engulfing her
she stares blankly at the bird above her
a crow encircles her, watching her
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I like how you phrased it, some of them really strong, emotions erupt in this poem, good write..
Very long, and because its so long, it gives you more room to go into detail.very good poem May. Its very strong... x3, millie
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7/24/2025 8:49:48 PM # 1.0.0
Inspiring and poetic, thanks. like the descriptions a lot. please write some more