I got to thinking,
about a topic called Death...
It's dark and scary,
...
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When you wrote this poem you were probably 13. I am amazed to think as to how at that tender age you could think of a scary subject like 'Death' to write a poem about and you have expressed your thoughts so clearly! But the poem seems to have ended without the last word.
Nice write, its so clear and crisp of what you are trying to get across. Well written :)
great poem^-^i liked it 10+++ The idea of death, the fear of it, haunts the human animal like nothing else; it is a mainspring of human activity - designed largely to avoid the fatality of death, to overcome it by denying in some way that it is the final destiny of man.
Write comment. Such an impressive start, Kerli U. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks