Death Comments

Write comment. Such an impressive start, Kerli U. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

When you wrote this poem you were probably 13. I am amazed to think as to how at that tender age you could think of a scary subject like 'Death' to write a poem about and you have expressed your thoughts so clearly! But the poem seems to have ended without the last word.

Nice write, its so clear and crisp of what you are trying to get across. Well written :)

i love it very meaninful! ! ! ! <33333