Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death is a sharp pain to the heart
Death is a feeling of sadness and a pain that won’t go away
Death is a sign to let you know it’s your time to go
Death is something you can’t run from
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Davon Montgomery
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Rachel Brewer 02 July 2010

I Like this alot, but sometimes death is a gift, lots of people need it because life is too hard. I dont think death is something that should be feared, but in the end we do all fear it. I look foreward to reading your other poems, I would be greatful if you could check mine out too! xxxxxxx

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Krystal Brown 01 November 2008

I like this poem cause its what people go through in life and it sucks so i like it great job...

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Lindsey Ashton 15 October 2008

sorry about the typo's, need a new keyboard: s

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Lindsey Ashton 15 October 2008

The only people who are affected by death are the living. ~How can you have such a bad outlook on death? its not always a bad thing. People who have suffered a lot see death as a comfort. I have written a peom about death, its a story of a mn who is pining for his wife, she comes for him in the end. thats not a bad thing. To feel this badly about death is ignoring life itself. please have a read of my poem, 'My Darling Wife'.

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Stacy Bea 28 April 2008

really Emotional very good poem

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Jessica Macklin 24 April 2008

i think the poem is good but, i think i heard that poem from another gurl named? .

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Bria Allen 22 April 2008

its really good. i like it

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Crystal Garcia 17 April 2008

wow! i realy liked it! !

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Davon Montgomery

Davon Montgomery

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