Death Comments

I can't express how much this helps me! I have experienced a lot of death in my life... but this poem is daying great things. Keep writing! !

I'm trying to suicide still but i haven't morale enough

Death conclusion learning chapter of life.....///

Hello Brandi, I have read most of your poems and they are all so well written. I myself, love poetry. This one gets right to the point, well said. I love the way you wrote it. It just says so much. Keep up the good work. More poems please. Thank you, Leslie. =P

Hi Brandi Young, I am a new member.I read your death poem.Its very interesting and beautiful. I impressed in your poem 'Death is forever.........'. Welldone! I expect these kind of good poems from your end. Thanks by Rakesh

i tried to commit suicide in tenth grade. it was a rea bad expirience. love the poem and it means alot to me and most likely any other person whos been there. thx

when I was in the 7th grade i wanted to kill myself.I had a friend help me out. You are doing a good thing with this poem.

Its a very touching poem.

this poem has helped me to stop wat i do or now did i am still emo but with out suicidal intent u have perfect talent have u read this depression by me? u should really read it talk soon

Brandi.. you express the finality of death seriously.... perfect poetic justice has been dished out here... *10*

Brilliant! This poem expertly describes death. Brandi, it reminds me of my best friend who had a fatal accident with a gun and is no longer with us. Beutiful work! It brought the tears back again. Keep on writing for you posses a great talent.

I have to say that is is soo true!

this poem is true on so many levels and should be heeded as a warning for those who wish death upon themselves and others. Brandi good work!

first time ive come across a poem telling people not to die, most talk about living life (as in to its fullest) . this sure is one of a kind!

really good poem. one of these days maybe i read poems to where they will save my life.

awww this is a good peom.. its awesome.. i hope you like miens too! ! =]]

This is a really good poem honey.........very touching

OMG this is deep really I love it! ...Can I have a copy? LOL

wow, that's pretty awesome. I wish I could write like that.

cool poem dude.this poem rockz mi sockz