Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

People try to push me
To a future that I dont want
They tell me drugs are good
Pain is pretty Death is normal
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Death Walking
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Yr ~Rune for Death~ 19 April 2011

very nice. this is well written and well expressed. though there is more to this death that should be expressed you did a good job from what i got from it. keep writting

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this is a strong agressive poem that seems to only want the negative ppl out of this place. those who dont want to be here..this is a great peom. it has words with meaning but i love the meaning i found behind it...

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Chidori Storm 31 March 2010

I commend you, oh great and powerful Death! ☺

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