Monday, October 1, 2007

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness suddenly came,
Without any warning;
Like the fleeting wind,
To disturb the calmness.
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Elmer Romulo Valdez
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Jemarie Ragudo 22 November 2007

Your poem gave the true essence of the word death. On one side, it is ugly, painful, devastating, and sometimes, emotionally crippling. On the other side - that's for you to write, on your next poem maybe. Excellent work! A 10 from me.

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Marvin Brato 01 October 2007

Sad reality but inevitable fact! Well penned Elmer, Highest mark.

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Elmer Romulo Valdez

Elmer Romulo Valdez

Luna, La Union, Philippines
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