Death. Comments

Each incoming breath is dead, Every outgoing breath dies outside.

Hollow and empty........death..../////

Death...... Emptiness..........

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You've written all about death, but I notice, Poet's Note talks about life, and that I think is very appropriate. If only there's death there's life. Well-said.

I am a dead poet with dead poetry, My poetry is an excuse to tread on dead ways that is why I Love Your poetry the most😄

Great, Deep, Perfect, Complete poetry.....

Life is invisible..whatever we see here is Death..Death is forming all forms

In poetry one must use more metaphors too much of repetition like dead death again and again O POET GR8888888 U May like to abort especially as ur poem is so longggggggggg_____________________________