Death Comments

beautiful one with expresions. death is fearsoe/......good expresiion always from u...10 read mine will i die?

Now I can realize the death...

Unique and modern. Lovely poem. CP

I love reading poems about the reality of death. This poems will certainly be one of my favorite. It's great! A masterpiece! ! !

hey man. this poem is a good attempt to explain death. i do think its a little short and the short sms thing did not cut it for me. i could give you a 7.

A nice way of expressing the arrival of death. Thanks for your nice comments on my poems The Birth Of Christ &Misery Misery Everywhere.

i agree with Obed, the elixer of life is change, from dying we grow, death is the instructor...great poem. you write well.

hai..tnx even ur poem is jus luvly........can u help me..actually i ryt short stories but i hav no idea which is a correct site that could help me 2 express my stories...do know any? if u do i would b glad

wow neat.............

i didnt imagine as that

Death O death when will you come.. an impressive write on death bravo.... a true love is on its way commig to take my soul away

Nicely written though the subject is eternal but the approach is new! !

it's a nice poem i liked it so much

about this poem let me use this qoute: Death is the opening of a more subtle life. In the flower, it sets free the perfume; in the chrysalis, the butterfly; in man the soul. -Adam