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The tree of life is Irrevocable. The rootless severance is the quadrant. Life is a flower of the tree of death.

A striking religious metaphor-'the chaplet of life'-opens the poem, which makes me think how life and death are inseparably linked. I have seen the tree of life and the tree of death, which you contrast so well. I want to stay on the tree of life as long as I possibly can. I fear the tree of death right now.

In the chaplet of life death is embedded. The tree of life is Irrevocable. Life is a flower of the tree of death.... //.... This is indeed a carefully composed poem with a fine selection of words are studded like real pearls but it's sad to note that the poem creates more confusion than clears it.