Sunday, June 16, 2013

Dearly Departed Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dull grey morning blanketed in a slight fog
a coldness that made the air like ice
as it entered my lungs
everything is quiet as I walk
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Hayley Pullen
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 17 June 2013

You have penned it so lovingly, the lurking love inside your heart for grandma. Let them pour out, Hayley, keep writing.10.

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