Monday, November 23, 2009

Dearest Once Again Comments

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I did it again
It's because I still love you
I can't admit it to myself
And definitely not to you
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Aiden Florence
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The emotion is raw, as if its a real life lived experience. Its strong, but in some stanza's could be alot stronger, i dont think it was a fail, i think it was a very impressive and much needed poem that should be read more.

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Catrina Heart 23 November 2009

sad one yet well expressed feelings.......great read! ! !

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