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A deeply affecting poem - strong, clear, compassionate, truthful. The first stanza resolves by its articulation all of the doubts and despair the other poems detail. You are engaged presently in a long journey with no end in sight. It may be a journey of discovery of new soul-truths or new lifestyle choices. Whatever it turns out to be, your poems are like the caranvan serai on such traveled routes. A place to refresh, to regroup, to tell the truth to an interested fellow traveler. This is a vital poem.