Saturday, January 11, 2014

Dear Wind Comments

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So quiet like the wind
She said good bye
Surrounded by the silence
And don’t know why.
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Jose Baez
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Cleveland Gibson 23 January 2014

An interesting poem full of sentiment. It need slight changes to a word here, and a word thee. Nothing too dramatic so that should make revision easier. Best

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