Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Dear Tears Comments

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Dear tears, you always with me
like smell with flowers
like hope with lovers.
You know how much i miss her
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Sagar Shelar
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Snehal Bhosale 05 March 2014

I like the way you relate to two similar things in one instant and then two dissimilar ones to depict your feelings.That is cool! The last line is really touching :)

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Shivani Misra 02 November 2012

Awww..your note touched me more than your poem.. Its sad.. But i wont show you any sympathy cos i know we human beings are very strong.. We can face anything.. Your poem was very beautiful.. Must b your first love.. I may be wrong.. But it a philosiphy i follow that all first things are just first experiences which are born to give us certain lessons where actually, something very beautiful is waiting for us at the end of the road.. Keep writing.. Lovely.. God Bless..

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Shivani Misra 02 November 2012

Awesome :) keep it up..

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Asif Andalib 02 November 2012

Tears wash our minds. Awesome write my friend

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

Beautiful writing! Awesome poem here! You picked a great topic!

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Sagar Shelar

Sagar Shelar

Nasik, India.
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