Dear Stillness, Comments
Still, are you here?
Still, it is I.
Still, you have found me.
Shrouded with the weight of your presence,
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the more I read this poem the more I adore it! the unique style of this piece gave it structure and control while speaking about a fairly uncontrolled and wild emotion. I like the contrast.
a different style and spilling of heart is great.keep inking.
wow, i like the last line the most, we all feel it, stillness to go yet we want it to stay funny but its true. nice poem.
very lovely poem wonderful.........great use of expresssions............I am spellbound I am still! :)
Argentine, I really like this poem! I'm caught in the stillness by reading this. Very powerful. A perfect illustration of the angst of being in that stillness. In stillness things are revealed. Rick Elpers
Appealing honesty throughout. A well narrated, quiet emotional reflection that the reader can relate to. Thanks for sharing.
Swimming in the still sea of significance yet making poetic waves! Well done my friend!
Stillness, you stop my heart... words uttered, words penned, Still, I am with you till the end... -Excellent piece Argentine, Great Ink! ; -) -Kelly.
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7/26/2025 9:35:38 PM # 1.0.0
Hmm... I like this. A lot. The last two lines... exquisite. Simply brilliant. Yeah... I like this. This... this is enough to put me in a pensive mood. Thanks.