Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Dear Stepmother Comments

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like a rose petal in the winter breeze
she ran off and left me
now all i see
are her cold blue eyes staring at me
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Michelle Verschlagen
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Beautiful. First two stanzas are written very well but soon the poem lost its track. Well, keep trying.

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