Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Dear Somebody Comments

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I really need somehelp in my life,
Also love that always used to give me hugs,
Is no longer above,
She is now below with no face to show,
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Monique Ornelas 22 January 2009

I honestly understand what you'r saying, I've always felt like suicide was a game, Like a guessing game, I guess you could say, And the point of the game is to see how long it takes to take me life away, does that kind of express what your feeling?

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Serenity Prayer 15 December 2008

i think you should read my poem 'Someone who can take your pain away.' i hope itll help you. im sorry for the pain and agnoy you feel....i really am..

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Kallie Madison 08 December 2008

your poem is so great! ! i love it! ! wow, suicide is not the best answer for love, love is silent but love is every where just got to gave someone a chance to prove love.....yup! ! love is worth living life....suicide is not the answer god will tell you when it your time to die! ! XOXO[KallieTRIGGER]

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*gives you a hug* it's going to be ok. im in the same state at the moment. really. im getting help though. keep your head up. there is somebody out there for everybody. *hugs* :) ill be here for you to talk to if you want.

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Brianna Trombley 03 December 2008

This poem is so deep, so much meaning and emotion, i cant relate to how you feel, but the poem helps.. its wonderful and sad at the same time... i hope you can find someone to show you love again..

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loneliness....its a murderous feeling....suicide nt a remedy though...have faith on Allah...if evry1 levz us, bt allah iz always there...then y nt love allah and be hiz forever

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Anita Blake 27 November 2008

sad but powerful, ive been there and understand that pain in this write.

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*Trusting You* 26 November 2008

this is a very powerful poem... I really like it...it shows lots of pain...great last line good job. Becca

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