Sunday, May 31, 2009

Dear Sister, I Wish I Knew How To Try. Comments

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You tell me that you need to know
how I truly feel

How can I possibly tell you that
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Angelic Warrior
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2009

That is why my life is now just a show Sorry I say, sister mine I want to give you everything left But my voice has died and you are deaf.............so much deep andemotional thoughts in side.. very touchy and i loved it most....10 yes to to.. what tomorrow...anywhere

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Janell Cressman 02 July 2009

such an amazing poem! ! ! ! ! you touched something deep inside my heart, I'm sure that your sister knows how you feel. at some point we just have to go and live life the way we think we want to and live for are selfs and God. amazing poem! ! ! 10! ! ! ! ! ! !

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I Am Charlie 14 June 2009

ah, the hardships of communication...very seeping, this. 'But my voice is dead, and you are dead' much like. telling family's sometimes hardest, huh.

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Rosalita Fernandez 31 May 2009

This is truely beautiful, can relate to this in so many ways possible, well done. and thank you

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