Thursday, August 23, 2018

Dear, Pole Star... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twinkle twinkle burning ball
Tell me the way to you
Faraway from the earth
Sparking in the faraway land.
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Naila Rais
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Abhipsa Panda 11 October 2018

A nice poem shared by you..beautiful...

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Bipin Churchung Rabha 04 September 2018

This is cool and beautiful.....absolutely stars are helpful, anyway happy birthday Naila 🎂....thank you!

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Naila Rais 05 September 2018

Thnx but my b day is far away from this date.... It is written casually...

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

So nice........You may Invite us also................................

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

thnks for th invitation.....................................Waqt ane par dekha jayega....

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Naila Rais 03 September 2018

U r alwys invited.... Thnx for encouraging words.... U r me or us...? Naila

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 September 2018

A short and sweet poem on north star that remains fixed and shows way to the traveler. Thanks for sharing Naila.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 August 2018

Hi Naila Nice poem on one’s fantasies and dreams... And unwittingly, are you looking for direction? Asking for guidance?

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Azhar Ibrahim 26 August 2018

Beautiful Poem, I hope you do find the way to the star!

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Naila Rais 26 August 2018

Oh really! Might be in future as I want to become aeronautical spacecraft designer.... Naila

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Azhar Ibrahim 26 August 2018

...or maybe you could just teleport there: p

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Naila Rais 26 August 2018

Kkk, surely... 😉

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Kostas Lagos 25 August 2018

This is indeed a beautiful poem! Way to go!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2018

This is a beautiful poem on star and travelling having stunning expression and nice collocation.

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