Saturday, January 12, 2008

Dear Poetry Comments

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Don't rhyme, Poetry.
Our thoughts and tongues don't think that way.
Steer clear of meter, sweet Poetry.
I'm tired of counting and scanning.
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Frank Cannon 20 January 2008

Eli must be short for electric. You lit up my day with this! !

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Aaron Tate 17 January 2008

;) aye, alot of non poet people these days don't have respect for the non-rythimic and rhyme poems. (spelling yes I know) They don't like the off beat and free style to much, which annoys me because it sets the poet stero type if they are all going to be conservative about whats a poem and whats a jumble of random words. These kind of poems will probably have the same sort of begging as jazz and ragtime musics. ;) good write. That tree I hope I don't fall far from it too.. And I want to grow next to it, and show it my ways too.

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Eli MorenoDrew

Eli MorenoDrew

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