Friday, March 9, 2007

! Dear Poemhunter Correspondent Comments

Rating: 2.8

Thank you for your last message;
it was good of you to write
and at such length..
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Michael Shepherd
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Trade Martin 09 March 2007

Nice, Michael...., and a thoughtful tutorial on puncuation and comma use....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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Original Unknown Girl 09 March 2007

Michael, I love this poem, it's so cleverly written and yes! you are right, punctuation can make such a difference to the intonation of such notes.... Great write. HG: -) xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 March 2007

in your preamble, sorry you started to ramble but i liked it all the same, so here my friend is a big fat 10... Michael well written...

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David Taylor 09 March 2007

Love from David, Love David, 'Love', where's David?

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Danny Reynolds 09 March 2007

Comma, comma, comma comma, comma chameleon..... or at your age, Coma, coma coma coma.....point taken? ; ¬)

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Phew, having come over all paranoid after messaging you five minutes ago I just checked my outbox and there was no 'love' there.... (punctuated pause) I'm with you on the sentiment and you've got me thinking about the impact of punctuation/lack thereof. Clever, witty, sensible, fine write. Some should sit up and pay attention Miss Brodie! Love, t-errified I may have an error of grammar x

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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