Friday, August 16, 2013

Dear My Unborn Child... Comments

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I wonder if your simile
Will be cute as me?
I wonder if your eyes
Will be bright as the stars?
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 August 2013

Wow! ...akubumnandi besihobe obu, yonke into idingekayo ukwakha I poem imnandi ikhona, one day isifiso sakho sizofezeka Zandi, uMvelinqgi uhlala enecebo for abantwana bakhe, nawe unelakho kaloku ungangxami, ndiyazi intokbana xa sewunaleso sifiso sokuba nomntana its like being struck by a love arrow... Great poem dear. Siya_! !

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Nontobeko Dlamini 19 August 2013

This is just wonderful! The eagerness of a mother to see her unborn child let alone unconcieved shows unconditional love...if all were born to such mothers they would turn out okay. Thank u!

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Kelvin Nwanji 18 August 2013

i love this...... i invite you to read mine too

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 August 2013

A baby's smile is the most beautiful sight in the universe. I like it '

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Gajanan Mishra 16 August 2013

See smile, thanks, I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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