Dear My Sweetheart, Comments

Hi Beth, finally got round to looking at your poems, and decided to comment on this one for now; my advice here would be to rework it a little...the basic structure of the poem is sound, and with a few adjustments, you could easily have a masterpiece on your hands here :) My best regards, Mark (London) ps I have four poems online - you are welcome to read any of them :)

beautiful completely stunning i love it

Thank you Aya :) I'm glad you think so

Thank you :) I didn't want the sadness to overpower the love in the poem

You took something sad and made it sound beautiful.