Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Dear Mr. Saggy Pants Comments

Rating: 4.5

Now if you knew me well you would know,
I would watch anything but a fashion show.
I am definitely not at all into Haute Couture,
I never could understand the great allure.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 26 May 2016

To me, it is not so much that their underwear waists are far above their pants. Insread, it is their pants' waists are far below their underwear waists! A while back I got my Boy Scout knife out and offered to use the 'awl' portion to make another hole in a guy's belt so his belt could be tightened more. He was very grateful and his pants now hang where they should! This is a TRUE story; it happened in front of my town's library. Bri :)

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You have my vote on this issue.Excellently expressed my friend. Now let's get. This poem to all concerned and start a revolution.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013

Wonderful! At the first look, the size of this poem appears like that of a pregnant woman. Not a good size though to attract eyes, I started going through it and the amusement started. When I finished reading it, I burst out in laughter. You have a great sense of humor. 'To me, seeing their underwear high above their pants waist, Is not a sign of revolution and free expression; just bad taste.' Quite agree! 'So come on, do yourself and your sweet honey a big huge favor, Pull up them pants, tighten that belt, and hide your underwear for later.' Lolz...

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Bri Edwards 11 October 2013

was it so obvious in my photo? ? ? ? overall i give this a high mark...esp. for cleverness and some of the rhyming, if not for the fashion sense. as always, this poemhunter fly-boy thanks you for sharing. :)

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