Saturday, May 23, 2015

Dear Moon, 'I Want To Be Like You' Comments

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In a dark shiny night,
While sitting on a rock,
I addressed to the bright Moon,
Dear Moon 'I want to be like you'.
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Aishaf Rehman
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 January 2016

Verily, the moon is a guide at night and being like a moon is being a guide.

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Ishrat Begum 04 June 2015

I loved the line you r the only one who shines wem rest of d world is dreaming..its like even in darkness god protect us

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Ayman Parray 02 June 2015

Very nice piece, Aisha. I am fascinated by the moon myself.

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Aisha Rehman 23 May 2015

Thank you! Cruzero Pablo This poetry is related to moon not mum Anyways thanks for appreciation.

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Cruzero Pablo 23 May 2015

very powerful and desrving mum such poetry

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Cruzero Pablo 23 May 2015

NO one is much precious as the mom who gave you birth fater painful sufefring and lookd after you through thick and thin!

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Aisha Rehman 23 May 2015

Thank you! Allotey Abossey

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Allotey Abossey 23 May 2015

It's a very touching to want to be like the moon only to help people... God bless you

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