Dear Mommy up in heaven,
you’re always in my mind.
I wish that you could tell me
why you left so much behind.
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CJ, A lovely and sweet poem. It precisely captures the way a child might feel in missing a mother who has died. It also can serve to let children who are dealing with a parent's death they are not alone. Kudos. Hugh
Beautiful, C.J. It brought tears to my eyes. Lovely! Shannon
This is a real 'weepy' CJ but a lovely poem too. Love Ernestine XXX
This is beautiful CJ. Somehow I guess there is a personal angle to it. I love the way that you wrote it as if it were a child: 'Me and Daddy miss you...' Rather than 'Daddy and I' Love Denis Joe
Tearful and Beautiful ~ Love is a many splendid thing....and this poem stands up and says this.
Hmmm... I never thought of it like that! Sweet and sad (but wonderful) poem.
this is sad yet it has some comfort it explains loss yet it gives some hope and even faith and there is plenty of love warm regards Allan
CJ, I just sat and stared at this poem for a while and tried to think of words that would benefit its excellence and insight...Sorry, I couldn't... Rusty
Beautiful poem, you are very talented writer. Nora