Monday, April 23, 2012

Dear Love (A Sonnet) Comments

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Dear love if by chance you ever find me
My heart and I beg you keep your distance
Please do not make your presence known to me
Promise us you will hide your existence
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Chinedu Dike 21 May 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry written from the heart.

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Mark Dillon 20 August 2012

thats good, reminds me of simon & garfunklesI AM A ROCK

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Clinton Ekeh 03 June 2012

Its okay and I love it! If Shakespeare were alive to have read this, He sure would have given you kudos. Keep it up!

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Makayla Straight 23 April 2012

Portia Dear, This poem was wonderful. I enjoyed reading every second. Thank you for sharing this poem. I am excited to read more in the future. Best Wishes Kay Kay

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Mark Sauer 23 April 2012

I approve of your form; rhyme and scansion matter, and I appreciate your sincere attempt to sculpt your thoughts within the discipline of a canon. Keep working in the sonnet form, and good luck to you.

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