Dear love if by chance you ever find me
My heart and I beg you keep your distance
Please do not make your presence known to me
Promise us you will hide your existence
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Its okay and I love it! If Shakespeare were alive to have read this, He sure would have given you kudos. Keep it up!
Portia Dear, This poem was wonderful. I enjoyed reading every second. Thank you for sharing this poem. I am excited to read more in the future. Best Wishes Kay Kay
I approve of your form; rhyme and scansion matter, and I appreciate your sincere attempt to sculpt your thoughts within the discipline of a canon. Keep working in the sonnet form, and good luck to you.
Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry written from the heart.