She looked like a ghost of herself
When she first came stumbling into my sight.
I asked her if I could help her, perhaps I
Could make what was wrong right.
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Vividly narrated and wistfully sad, this piece stays with the reader as a mark of the effects of 21century living on a troubled spirit..... very moving Chris. - -10 -with greetings from Fay in Cornwall U.K.
A very sad piece but beautifully related Chris...you have managed to capture all her troubled emotions in a maningful and touching way 10
You made me feel in this poem.