Friday, April 11, 2014

Dear Kristen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Always on another's shoulder
Smiles never meant for me
Your laughter will never reach my ears
Your future I will not see.
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Chuy Amante 11 April 2014

Fantastic heartfelt lines! A+ thanks for your magistracy

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Gajanan Mishra 11 April 2014

beautiful creation , thanks.

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Richard Blay 11 April 2014

Please, check the spelling of 'bright' in the second stanza in line three. Nice piece, it sounds personal I guess.

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