Dear Jordan Comments

soo sweet! ! this one i likes too :) & this person is lucky to have u! ! !

The poem is really s really good....

Yes, as a poem good! In real life too early! Complete your studies and think of the poem when you come to the age!

can really relate (but towards girls lol) . loved the poem.

Good job, Kylee. A sweet, genuine piece. Btw, you don't need to add periods :)

Very nice poem! ! Luv that style

i couldnt think of anything that rhymed with life.

The Wife part is a little strong. It however was very good

Absolutely wonderful..this must surely win his heart too :) Blessings and light, menime..

wow an astounding poem. it makes u wonder though can u fall in love at such a young age? but then again love has no boundaries right! keep up the good work. i'm impressed. one more thing - focus on school now - leav love and marriage for later :)

very nice.. you would be an excellent poet.

Very simple and expressive style! I liked your poem. Keep writing with more details.