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All earnest and tryful Clutching their pitiful morning Daily news Slipped on the ice and fell Both inside Five minutes And I cried, I cried. Just struck a familiar chord. I like this in a halting sort of way. Parts of it rang truer than others but I liked it.

Very intense, a direct painful hit!

Amberlee, I also enjoyed this poem. Firstly, I love the title and thet is what drew me to read it. My favourite stanza is: - 'I am writing this and hoping that its meaning, my meaning, THE meaning will mean something to you now'. I thought that was very clever. Thanks Amberlee Gypsy

I really liked this poem, especially this part: 'So, I won't say I love you 'cause those words mean more than something now- and I won't say I miss you 'cause it gets lost in translation.' simply stunning! well done for this lovely poem! ! ! HBH

I love it when someone gives you a low rating and doesn't even leave a comment as to how to improve your writing...lol