Saturday, November 7, 2009

Dear God, Comments

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spoken: daddy stop!
daddy dont you love me anymore?
*the sound of a belt meeting flesh*
*whimpers and door slams shut*
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Monica Rose 07 November 2009

Oh, god. That was a very intense poem. You made my heart stop a couple beats. Nice job. ~Monica Rose

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