How dare you
approach me,
Dear frog!
Me, the anatomist cruel
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Intriguing poem. Interesting and deep reflection by the anatomist. I love the honesty and the almost-remorse shining through the verses. Excellent write
Thanks dear for reading my poem Dear Frog and giving such lovely remark.
Have all the ponds in the state dried up for the mentor of dear frogs, Sir? Have you stopped coming here? Silence over three weeks overruled.
Thanks for lovely comment and sorry for reciprocating late. Thanks again for visiting my page.
How dare you approach me! Me, the anatomist, cruel.....Its a masterly piece of work dear Binaya!
With forceps in one hand and scissors in other unable to feel the spikes in your nerve sir I absolute love your poem thanks for shearing 10++++++
We are treating life as a biology lab, always dissecting and cutting up. People are disintegrating. A thought provoking poem. Warm regards, Bipasha
A different level of a thought crafted into a wonderful poem....highly meaningful with the sharp scalpel waiting to split open the skull. How dare you approach me! Me, the anatomist, cruel Know no love, no compassion.......excellent
need warmth need amplexus dare not approach me my territory the frigid trap of death, Me, the anatomist there to anesthetize you for reason not known sir very heart full poem you are the best poet of odisha10++++++
Me, the anatomist know not me know not you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+
(part 2) The mental imbalance of human beings which lead to perversion and cruelty is depicted here with clinical accuracy. It is as if the poets reads into their mind: How and why they are bent upon inflicting injuries on others- why they hurt others mentally and bodily... Very profound anatomy of human mind. A perfect 100++
Hi Binaya, A clearly metaphorical poem, delving into the depths of human psyche with deep insight. : : With forceps in one hand : : and scissors in other : : unable to feel : : the spikes in your nerve: : Very poignant write! (Contd)
Me, the anatomist cruel know no love, thanks sir very heart full poem10++++++
Me, the anatomist cruel thanks sir very heart full and nice poem10++++++++++(+((+
When will idiots like Rupert stop coming to this site? Has he read twinkle twinkle little star? ? What does he know about poetry? He doesn't know how to respect others? Did his parents not teach him about respecting elderly people? He should stop harassing poets and go with a broom somewhere to a mall or a school and start cleaning. Poem Hunter is a forum for people with rich mind and sensible heart. I request him to Please get out peacefully and let us live and read poetry here.
Bad people, uninvited guests, diseased dogs and non-human-beings like Rupert live longer than expected. You shaould not mind getting a harsh comment from an idiot like Hentazia Rupertia Mualiasis (His Latrine name) who knows how to frame sentences in English and all his forefathers were sweepers, so always speaks of sweeping c. cleaning. He would never be able to write a poem. Poetic nymph as he is.
Very nice poem. Thanks for so nice one.